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    dots Submission Name: Should I Love?dots
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    Author: sageeriol
    ASL Info:    23/male/GA.
    Elite Ratio:    3.19 - 314/322/106
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsShould I Love?dots
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    False bravado
    Over ill fated fear
    A sorrow filled
    Odyssey of my own
    Bleeding my soul
    Through the ravines
    Of my hollow veins
    Shifting the tides
    Of heaven and hell
    To open rifts
    In a heart still
    Mocked by emotions
    It cannot
    Be rid of
    Unrequited feelings
    Causing self doubt
    In the depths of
    A shattered mind




    Submitted on 2012-02-02 17:50:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Wow very well written and very meaningful as well. Thanks for the write.
    | Posted on 2012-03-28 00:00:00 | by PrettyHeart | [ Reply to This ]
      I second what shaman has said and written so eloquently. Pain, fear and self doubt can be so difficult to overcome, but as someone said to me if you dont take a risk you cannot lose, but you can also never gain. Take a chance just be wary who it is with.
    | Posted on 2012-02-03 00:00:00 | by stormyskies | [ Reply to This ]
      Veins will heal
    a shattered mind can be reassembled
    through the trenches of love
    landmines can resemble solace
    as if her face might no longer haunt you
    but what if in death your ghosts are there to greet you
    Purgatory will have to do with hell in the rear-view and heaven a mirage on the horizon
    Love yourself because its difficult and when you do the end result is love returned
    | Posted on 2012-02-02 00:00:00 | by shaman | [ Reply to This ]


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