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    dots Submission Name: Addiction freedots

    Author: stormyskies
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    dotsAddiction freedots

    For the first time in years
    I can look in the mirror,
    to finally face, myself and my fears.
    Eyes now, clear and true,
    look back at me,
    no more red, only blue.

    My choice of addiction
    I finally say goodbye,
    no more pain, no more affliction.
    How free, I am now left feeling
    finally my true self,
    with my hurts, I'm finally dealing.

    Thinking, thought my life was better
    oh how deluded,
    my mind now unfettered.
    I would say, you stole so much
    but I was the one giving in,
    blame I see, only now as a crutch.

    Free from misery, you offered me,
    I realise not, rather
    hell for years, financial slavery.
    I let go of you, now and forever
    no regrets,
    I've untied the tether.

    Making up for what is lost
    I cannot do this,
    too high was the cost.
    Starting fresh, happy with now
    doing better from here
    not giving up, my mind or power.

    Submitted on 2012-02-03 05:32:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was a fantastic write. A nice read after writing Delicious. The feeling of addiction free living is both an emotional toll and a great sacrifice.
    This is beautiful.

    Keep up the great work and I'll keep reading.

    | Posted on 2012-02-04 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]

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