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    dots Submission Name: Ever Changing Prisondots

    Author: DearlyDeparted
    Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 211/290/189
    Words: 155
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsEver Changing Prisondots

    Can you see them...
    The cracks within this faulty structure.
    Don't underestimate its strength.
    For these soft hued walls have kept me years.
    Like an ever changing prison.

    The door you came in,
    isn't the same.
    Yet it is.
    Same size;
    and place.
    But what you find on the other side;
    will make your heart race.
    No exit,
    now's another endless hall.
    Built just for you to fall;
    into the bowels of insanity.
    Hurling head long into a corridor;
    not there once before.
    Fixed heavy metal doors,
    with tiny diamond shaped windows line both walls.
    As you pass note that all the rooms are vacant.
    Though it isn't about what you can see.
    Open your ears.
    Listen to the psychotic bliss.

    Can you hear them...
    The cracks within this faulty structure.
    Don't underestimate its strength.
    For these soft hued walls have kept me years.
    Like an ever changing prison.

    Submitted on 2012-02-03 08:13:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i've had these walls...for so many years i can't count them...

    what's on the other side might surprise you...problem is, you can't get to the other side...i won't let you or anyone get there.

    i'm too tough...my psychotic bliss protects my soft outer shell...which tries to let you in...

    i am quite faulty and look like i should have fallen years ago...but alas...here i am..still on my two feet.

    | Posted on 2012-02-03 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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