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    dots Submission Name: Talks With Evildots
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    Author: DearlyDeparted
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    dotsTalks With Evildots
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    If I pulled down the veil;
    would you run?
    Screaming in horror,
    at the sight before you.
    If I shed my shell;
    could you accept the hell I live in?

    The third eye peers through;
    filtered by purple..
    Wearily shaking its head within.
    ~Tsktsktsk
    "Ignorance is bliss, little lady."




    Submitted on 2012-02-04 18:27:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      First the Title is just flat out awesome. Then I so enjoyed reading
    the rest. It is fresh and spicy in the macabre way I love best.
    Now one question is it. (could you except the hell I live in?) or
    (could you accept the hell I live in?)
    | Posted on 2012-02-04 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


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