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    dots Submission Name: Reuniting Heartsdots

    Author: stormyskies
    Elite Ratio:    4.26 - 1035/868/264
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsReuniting Heartsdots

    Never a truer love witnessed
    than that which my grandparents shared.
    Except for the love in my own heart
    for the one, my soul lays bare.

    Interwoven souls signifies true love,
    accepting wholly, without condition.
    Nothing taken, only given,
    together creating complete addition.

    Growing invariably by the day,
    in fact with every moment.
    True love insurmountable,
    words to describe, a mere token.

    Shown in the way you look toward
    and at anothers heart.
    Gently supporting, boosting,
    never tearing each other apart.

    Demonstrated through strength,
    particularly when times are low.
    Brightening the darkness always,
    nothing can ovecome, true love shown.

    It is in each and every whisper,
    spoken between two souls.
    The mold of true love reuniting hearts,
    whom each other, has always known.

    Submitted on 2012-02-06 02:19:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A lovely acolade to love........what beautiful words you have chosen to express real true love.........

    Wonderful stuff from you.

    | Posted on 2012-02-06 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]

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