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    dots Submission Name: Pure Blissdots

    Author: simpleandgreen
    Elite Ratio:    1.8 - 39/141/136
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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       If only there were such a place

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    dotsPure Blissdots

    Can't ever imagine a place like this,
    Full of magic, wonder, serenity, and bliss.

    The sun shines brightly, with a gentle wind,
    Warm, comfortable rays, soak up in your skin.

    Just lying there on a carpet of grass,
    Taking in sweet air and watching creative clouds pass.

    The fiery orange leaves, rattles and sing,
    Watch late butterflies, fluttering their wings.

    The sky turns ebony, twinkling with lights,
    Like a merry tree, on cool christmas nights.

    Sighing contently, all stress melts away.
    Oh if this could only last one more beautiful day.

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