Past vs Present

Author: rachel gless ASL Info:    23/f/mx Elite Ratio:    3.56 - 68 /89 /37 Words: 106

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Past vs Present

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You talk future, you make plans But in the present, you’re out of my hands A past so lovely, even fairy tale But a witchcraft’s magic has stained our way A miracle kiss once woke me up But now it’s routinary, I light no more The most beautiful magic was lost in the way And left us a gray path to walk as lame pairs What happened to excitement and impossible games? What happened with playing and getting our way? Did rules came to beat us, creativity failed? Or are we just grown ups who can’t afford to dare?

Submitted on 2012-02-07 18:13:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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I like to think the passion becomes understanding which, though it may seem somewhat estranged to your mind, I feel is more rewarding! I'm not even willing to concede less intense. Bruce

| Posted on 2012-02-07 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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