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Running Water

Author: rachel gless
ASL Info:    23/f/mx
Elite Ratio:    3.56 - 68 /89 /37
Words: 172
Class/Type: Poetry /Romance
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What happens when you have been in a relationship for too long?

Running Water

Have you ever felt stuck with your true love?
The routine’s suffocating, ‘til you feel no more?
The most bitter of your tears follow you along
And the butterflies that held you are there no more.

Feel like screaming, feel like crying, feel like hiding
Feel our love pass through my hands like running water.
Can I keep it? Should I keep it? How to keep it?

Is there something else to rescue from our good night kiss?
Is there meaning left behind out every I love you speech?

There’s no fighting, cheats of lying.
Just a crystal fragile feeling cliff hanging.
Has it broken and is far beyond repair?
Or is it mendable but will never be the same?

Though I know that love evolves and relationships change
I’m still in love with that young boy that I once met
What did I do, what did I say to make you change?
And become the man whose flame in the eyes was swept away.

Submitted on 2012-02-07 18:15:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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