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    dots Submission Name: Longingly Awaitingdots
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    Author: stormyskies
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    This incredible yearning I cannot ignore,
    the distance driving me, to want you more and more.
    As time passes, it does not pass with ease,
    it makes my heart ache til it almost bleeds.

    Containing this feeling I cannot do,
    so all thats left, is to write these words to you.
    Needing you in my arms, your eyes upon mine,
    the way I miss you cannot be defined.

    Saying goodbye was the hardest thing to do,
    saying goodnight online, makes me cry to be with you.
    I love our chats and pure expressions of love,
    but in your arms is where I need to be, utmost and above.

    Til the day we can meet again, time goes so slowly,
    yet one thing is true, whilst I need you, I do not feel lonely.
    Feeling your love around me, even tho, it not be your arms,
    carries to me, an incredible and enormous calm.

    So patiently I await our love so true,
    longing to entwine, me with you.
    Our souls already have become one,
    leaving only, for this immense yearning, to be over and done.




    Submitted on 2012-02-07 18:43:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Yes indeed, love can span many many miles....and as the say, absence does make the heart grow fonder.

    Lovely expression from you.

    Frsank.

    | Posted on 2012-02-10 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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