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    dots Submission Name: Online Romancedots

    Author: stormyskies
    Elite Ratio:    4.26 - 1035/868/264
    Words: 179
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsOnline Romancedots

    Handsome, loving, intelligent, you have it all,
    through words and love you speak to my heart,
    capturing my mind, body and soul,
    even from across the seas so incredibly vast.

    How blessed I was to have met you,
    for you to have travelled those seas,
    that you love me as you do,
    permitting our online romance, to become reality.

    So many thought it suspect,
    that through the net love could be found,
    yet even before we met,
    our hearts and souls were forever bound.

    Long into the nights we had talked,
    sharing in a way, that offline would not have been,
    admiring the path each had walked,
    in turn exposing secrets and passions unseen.

    Starting as friends we supported each other,
    chatting led to sharing our lives journey,
    the darkness we shared, hearts open, nothing to cover,
    no longer knowing each other, as just Varla and Stormy.

    Now in real life, together we have been,
    noone attempts to deny,
    the love we have, for all can see,
    the changes in both you and I.

    Submitted on 2012-02-07 18:44:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Sweet I pray it works out in the long run
    my dear

    hang on my dear the first few years are the roughest

    I pray god grants the union you seek
    | Posted on 2012-02-08 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]

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