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    dots Submission Name: Land of Possibilitiesdots
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    Author: Realitywarp87
    ASL Info:    25/M/FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 27/53/63
    Words: 199
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 587
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       Just about that plays that draws out your creativity.


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    dotsLand of Possibilitiesdots
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    Deep in the forest, where one may not know
    Buried in stardust there's but the faintest glow
    It's the home of possibilities, of enchantment and charm
    Where one shant not worry of sorrow or harm

    Into the woods, past the oaks and the ferns
    Through the mist and the dew drops that the morning grass yearns
    Through the schrubs and the shrooms, through the thistles and thorn
    The raining of leaves, and the showering acorns

    Under roots, crackling bark, on a stump of a once great tree
    Where the sound of the forest makes the wind dance free
    Where the sunlight peers through, as if a guiding light
    Sparkling through the tree tops like fireflies in the night

    Circling around you are the wishes and dreams
    Your wants and desires, the hopes that you gleam
    The one place you don't give way to doubts or to fears
    Where you can rid all your worries and not shed a tear

    This is the home of things you once knew
    Things once forgotten, and things to come true
    A place where imagination, creativity, and thoughts can play
    A place to escape to, that is never far away..




    Submitted on 2012-02-07 20:00:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i like how you paint pictures with a very natural, unforced rhyming style...i am usually not fond of rhyming poetry much...but there are exceptions

    and the ease you show, your work is definitely an exception...

    like listening to smooth blues.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-02-08 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      Quite a journey described here. Almost like being there, but obviously I have my own forest to get lost in. Though yours is very nice also, thanks for the visit.

    And the answer to Bruce's question is yes, such a man is still wrong but if he's alone in his own forest he's free to imagine otherwise.
    | Posted on 2012-02-08 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      A wise philosopher once asked "If a man speaks in the forrest, and there's no woman there to hear him, is he still wrong?"

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2012-02-07 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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