In the Morning by Realitywarp87

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Submission Name: In the Morning dots

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Author:	Realitywarp87
ASL Info:	25/M/FL
Elite Ratio:	3.1 - 27/53/63
Words:	110

Class/Type:	Poetry/Nature
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In the Morning dots

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The morning sun rises
As dawn sets to ride away
It peers over the horizon
And marks the start of a new day

The gentle morning breeze
and the flickering sun's rays
Awaken my restless body
From the field in which I lay

The morning dew sparkles
Off my face they seem to play
As I baske here in the grass
My private hideaway

The morning sounds of freedom
From the subtle songs of the bluejay
Have me captivated
And I slowly drift astray

The morning is soon ending
Much to my dismay
But what I love most about the morning
Is that tomorrow it replays

Submitted on 2012-02-07 20:04:04 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  yeah, what they said.

frame this picture.

jacob
| Posted on 2012-02-08 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
  Ah yes, but that means tomorrow is only yesterday beyond the here and now. And the dawning of a new day is an excellent time to contemplate your future not revel in the fact we might see tomorrow.

Bruce
| Posted on 2012-02-07 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
  Very nice indeed. We've had some very nice mornings lately and I have been up to see the sunrise. I wasn't sure what to make of the line "As dawn sets to ride away" but what follows makes it fit. We don't think much of the morning ending as it transitions into day and then evening. Doing so makes us appreciate it for what a special thing it is. Thanks
| Posted on 2012-02-07 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

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