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    Author: littlepoet
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    2012

    well it's the year 2012 are you going to
    accept the challenges and the
    possibilities the choice
    is yours.
    peace

    do we realize
    our importance of our small deeds
    or is it the degree of greatness
    of a small act of kindness.




    Submitted on 2012-02-08 19:43:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      should be "the importance of our small deeds"
    I rarely see small act of kindness nowadays. Even in trains men don't offer seat to elderly people anymore. This is a sad realization and likewise a challenge.
    Glad you captured that..
    | Posted on 2012-09-26 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]


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