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Author: littlepoet
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well it's the year 2012 are you going to
accept the challenges and the
possibilities the choice
is yours.

do we realize
our importance of our small deeds
or is it the degree of greatness
of a small act of kindness.

Submitted on 2012-02-08 19:43:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  should be "the importance of our small deeds"
I rarely see small act of kindness nowadays. Even in trains men don't offer seat to elderly people anymore. This is a sad realization and likewise a challenge.
Glad you captured that..
| Posted on 2012-09-26 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]

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