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    dots Submission Name: Preparations for a wonderfully long journey. dots

    Author: stormyskies
    Elite Ratio:    4.26 - 1035/868/264
    Words: 283
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsPreparations for a wonderfully long journey. dots

    Knowing all too well the rough seas we must travel,
    as well as the calm, we plan our journey ahead.
    Being all too aware of the dangers that we will face,
    yet determined and steady we prepare.

    Packing all necessities
    required for a wonderfully long trip,
    checking over the list once more,
    we decide it is complete and set our course.

    Having previously travelled
    with others, yet bounding to fail.
    A quiet belief dwelled within,
    that this voyage would not.

    Having ticked off love,
    an enormous amount stowed.
    Support we had already shared,
    through deepest dark hours into the
    radiating light, always there for the other.

    Commitment, day in and day out
    as forced to be a part had asked us to do.
    Loyalty, we had stood by one another
    regardless of all that was thrown in our paths.
    Faith that each other can do anything
    and that together we can achieve everything.

    Honesty, something that had been a given
    from the day our paths crossed.
    Trust, which we had demonstrated
    in the meeting of a familiar stranger.

    Adoration, admiring all we had discovered
    through long discussion also witnessing first hand.
    Nourishment, growing always together,
    never once leaning toward different light.

    Dedication, devoted only to one another
    and making sure the path was clear.
    Patience, shown constantly never judging
    only accepting without condition.

    Kindness, remaining always
    in our eyes, words and hearts.
    Passion, and desire unbridled
    in ever look, word and touch.

    And a connection that reached over the miles
    of vast ocean originally setting us apart.
    This relationship we had innitiated together
    holds all that is required for a successful peregrination.

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