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    dots Submission Name: Loves Dedicationdots
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    Author: stormyskies
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    Words: 130
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    Giving my life comes with ease,
    as does every effort given to you,
    I give with all my might to please,
    my soul is yours, through and through.

    Exchanging promises with each new day,
    with vigour and loving attempt,
    striving to pave a way,
    committed always, to try preempt.

    That which may cause us to fall,
    endeavouring always, beyond and above,
    vowing to do, all it might call,
    declaring myself a missionary, for this true love.

    Taking forever to bended knee,
    to eternity showering dedication,
    I bow my life before thee,
    without a single doubt or hesitation.

    For your love my spirit will soar,
    hoping to reach, the greatest heights,
    giving my all, to the one I adore,
    for our love, I will always fight.




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      Your heart is singing sweet the song of true love.

    Long may you sing.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2012-02-10 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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