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    dots Submission Name: Rapedots
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    Author: black_beauty18
    ASL Info:    25/Female/Hutchinson, KS
    Elite Ratio:    4.04 - 153/146/46
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    dotsRapedots
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    Sheathed in soft secrecy
    Innocent.
    Untouched.
    Pure.

    Corrupted and poisoned
    Violation.
    Invasion.
    Defeat.

    Your vicious intrusion
    Unworthy.
    Disgusting.
    Unfair.

    Your violent release
    Deep.
    Toxic.
    Vile.




    Submitted on 2012-02-10 20:57:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this! I enjoy reading in posts in which you can relate too. Rape is a hard thing to experience and sometimes wounds never heal. However, sometimes its good to know your not alone, and that other people have experienced it too.
    | Posted on 2012-02-20 00:00:00 | by TalentedChild | [ Reply to This ]
      rape is so ugly. and you captured that.

    the invasion of self from another is probably one of the worst things a person can survive, because you never truly feel safe again.

    i wrote a piece fairly similar in vein, it was a long time ago, i called it Almost. if you get a chance, check it out and let me know what you think.

    | Posted on 2012-02-15 00:00:00 | by Oracle | [ Reply to This ]
      deep emotion and hurt packed into few words...

    this stings...

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-02-11 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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