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    Author: robbie
    ASL Info:    20/m/mi
    Elite Ratio:    2.79 - 53/54/36
    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 856
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 886



    Description:
       free style of sourts


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    dotsfree flowdots
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    Yes its true Im a lyrical poet
    Even though most dont even know it
    Im a fuckin mastermind
    Look in my eyes that youll find
    That a monster i hold inside
    No longer is he down to hide
    Go ahead and fuck with me
    Only then youll be able to see
    The real monster you let out
    Ill take you down with out a doubt
    But i smoke that killa kush
    That allows you a little extra push
    I try to stay high in the sky
    But you bring me down youll be the one to die
    Ill bury you underground
    Left alive but cant make a sound
    Not afraide to take a bat to your dome
    But please no blood on the chrome
    Cops wont get me on no murder case
    They can try but ill get away in the chace
    N.cs gave me all the tricks




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