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    dots Submission Name: True Loves Gardendots

    Author: stormyskies
    Elite Ratio:    4.26 - 1035/868/264
    Words: 142
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsTrue Loves Gardendots

    Keeping a special garden
    tucked away just for you
    prying eyes given no pardon
    it is luscious, always in bloom.

    Trees line the border
    filled with delicious fruits
    love swing in the corner
    where upon we share love so true.

    Flying through the air
    entwined in each others arms
    incredible all that we share
    viewing this garden of charms.

    Cherry blossoms of pink
    roses of deep red
    honey dew we can drink,
    soft heather forms a bed.

    Lotus, that of pink and white
    beckon you most softly
    offering an abundance of delight
    blossoms gently dropping.

    Elms create romantic light
    reaching for their peak
    seeking too unknown heights
    peaceful embrace, lovers view complete.

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