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True Loves Garden


Author: stormyskies
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Words: 142
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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True Loves Garden



Keeping a special garden
tucked away just for you
prying eyes given no pardon
it is luscious, always in bloom.

Trees line the border
filled with delicious fruits
love swing in the corner
where upon we share love so true.

Flying through the air
entwined in each others arms
incredible all that we share
viewing this garden of charms.

Cherry blossoms of pink
roses of deep red
honey dew we can drink,
soft heather forms a bed.

Lotus, that of pink and white
beckon you most softly
offering an abundance of delight
blossoms gently dropping.

Elms create romantic light
reaching for their peak
seeking too unknown heights
peaceful embrace, lovers view complete.




Submitted on 2012-02-12 07:05:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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