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Gravitation of My Love


Author: FadeStones
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For Valentines Day


Gravitation of My Love



Do not come to me,
Let me love from afar,
The sun is miles apart
From the earth,
Yet the sun do not deprive
The earth from its beam,
From apart it helps germinate
New lives on earth.

You are a part of my life
As the moon is a part of the earth,
From apart -
The moon beautifies
The earth with its sublime light,
Like the moon -
Let me love you from apart
And help me germinate
Sweet thoughts within me.

O my love
Let me love you
From miles apart,
I promise-
My love for you
Will never wane.

At the center of the earth
Gravity is zero,
Dear -
Please do not request me
To come to you,
For like the earth
At the centre of my heart
The gravity of Love is zero.




Submitted on 2012-02-13 11:22:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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