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    dots Submission Name: Gravitation of My Lovedots

    Author: FadeStones
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    dotsGravitation of My Lovedots

    Do not come to me,
    Let me love from afar,
    The sun is miles apart
    From the earth,
    Yet the sun do not deprive
    The earth from its beam,
    From apart it helps germinate
    New lives on earth.

    You are a part of my life
    As the moon is a part of the earth,
    From apart -
    The moon beautifies
    The earth with its sublime light,
    Like the moon -
    Let me love you from apart
    And help me germinate
    Sweet thoughts within me.

    O my love
    Let me love you
    From miles apart,
    I promise-
    My love for you
    Will never wane.

    At the center of the earth
    Gravity is zero,
    Dear -
    Please do not request me
    To come to you,
    For like the earth
    At the centre of my heart
    The gravity of Love is zero.

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