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    dots Submission Name: DragonBorne.dots
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    Author: Joachim
    ASL Info:    75 Male RSA
    Elite Ratio:    5.39 - 361/264/178
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 402
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    Bytes: 620



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       A Tribute to Skyrim. Joachim


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    DragonBorne.

    Borne on the currents of eons past,
    Mysteries span my wings.

    Forgotten legends sculpture me.
    Wisdom of the Sages
    Ancient worlds of Ages Past
    Wrought my Wisdom.

    Long gone Atlantis Formed me
    That mighty Herald Age
    Woven by FireForge
    Wrought with Mysteries
    Yet Gone!.

    Formed by Hands of the gods.
    Tested in battles long Gone
    Unscathed by the Ages
    In mystery clothed.

    Beware Mighty Men
    This legend Lives.
    DragonBorn
    I am.





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      Ah yes, the dragon sits on his hoard of gold tempting those daring enough to seize a bagful. Subjects of the sages, wisdom of the ages, all can be found in dragon's hoard including dead mages. I think your presentation of this was elegant and graceful. I had almost forgotten how good you are!

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2013-07-05 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      You fully and I slowly begin to appreciate the ever increasing range of media through which the muses are ever working their magic (or however one might wish to phrase such). The forever being brought freshly into the now to the benefit of those who can appreciate it. It becomes, as ever, quite absorbing.

    Lloyd
    | Posted on 2012-03-02 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      I see.. every line is a meaning in itself. really very beautiful piece of work.
    my fav lines:

    Formed by Hands of the gods.
    Tested in battles long Gone

    the whole poem has a grace in it. legendary and epic. good job!
    | Posted on 2012-02-24 00:00:00 | by Iram | [ Reply to This ]
      A very well written piece! I'm a big fan of the legend of Atlantis, and I enjoyed how you wove this into your poem. Moreover, I'm a big fan of dragon legends...very interesting how you mixed the two together (Atlantis and dragons) into one piece.

    | Posted on 2012-02-19 00:00:00 | by krs3332003 | [ Reply to This ]


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