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    dots Submission Name: A Link to the Presentdots
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    Author: Realitywarp87
    ASL Info:    25/M/FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 27/53/63
    Words: 194
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 631
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1266



    Description:
       A day in the life of Link.


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    dotsA Link to the Presentdots
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    My life is such a mystery
    Don't know when it began
    A journey to self discovery
    Is where I always seem to land

    I make my way through many paths
    A trail to new locations
    On a quest to save the world
    And lead my princess to salvation

    Through the depths of the forest
    Inside a fire pitted cave
    Under water reefs and grottoes
    From all these my path I pave

    I don't have many companions
    Who can help me through these deeds
    Just a few friends, guides, and fairies
    And my ever loyal steed

    There is a constant struggle
    That I try to over come
    An inner darkness, that over powers
    I, to it's will, succumb

    From my greatest enemy
    This darkness comes to threat
    Until I defeat this evil
    I promise to not rest

    But where there's darkness, light shines forth
    And I am shown a chance of hope
    Filled with courage, wisdom, and power
    These forces help me cope

    Now armed for battle, determination set
    I fight and shall prevail
    Unsheathe my sword, and equip my shield
    There is no room now to fail!




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      me and my nephews play these games all the time. they're one of the few games that makes the wii worth owning. this was awesome. truely an inspired work of art!!!
    | Posted on 2012-02-15 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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