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    dots Submission Name: Who am I?dots
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    Author: RamiroTitus
    ASL Info:    20, Male, Turlock Ca
    Elite Ratio:    0.01 - 0/0/5
    Words: 151
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       This is the thoughts God put in my head when i was fighting my case and in the end his love and mercy did set me Free!!


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    dotsWho am I?dots
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    Who am i to Question God?
    He who knows my fate before it is sealed
    How dare i question God
    For i am but one of the millions he has healed
    Though many times I've turned my back on him
    He is never hesitant to take me back in
    Though it may seem I'm fighting odds
    Nothing is impossible in the eyes of the my God
    They all say I'll never again see the outs of these walls
    but God reminds me gently
    "Remember that time in juvenile hall!
    Oh you of little faith
    Why do you doubt
    I'm your God Almighty
    I've never lost a bout!
    Find your faith and you will see
    How my grace and mercy sets you free
    Time to stop walking by sight
    and learn to walk by Faith
    for the path that's in store for you
    Is the path that I paved!!!"




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