You are the earth.

Author: Rainwater Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 7 /29 /19 Words: 25

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You are the earth.

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Your body is the earth and lake and your hair is the mountains and your breath is the blue and my arms are the trees.

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Nice picture here.

| Posted on 2012-02-20 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

this little piece took my breath away... so well constructed....powerful fusion with nature. jacob

| Posted on 2012-02-17 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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