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You are the earth.


Author: Rainwater
Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 7 /29 /19
Words: 25
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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You are the earth.



Your body is the earth and lake and
your hair is the mountains and
your breath is the blue and
my arms are the trees.




Submitted on 2012-02-17 01:54:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Nice picture here.
| Posted on 2012-02-20 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
  this little piece took my breath away...

so well constructed....powerful fusion with nature.


jacob
| Posted on 2012-02-17 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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