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    dots Submission Name: Put Your Love on Medots
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    Author: theman
    ASL Info:    21/m/mn
    Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 496/478/149
    Words: 194
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 464
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    Bytes: 1094



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    dotsPut Your Love on Medots
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    put ur love on me
    all your hope and dreams
    seductively whisper your fantasy
    anything and everything
    I changed the locks and here is the keys
    I promise you can put your faith in me

    Eyes so gorgeous, kisses so delicate, do you know how it feels to be treated like a princess?
    Let me let you in a on little secret, your a undercover heart break agent, what your badge number File a complaint to the department, unlawful seize and seizure.
    Hold your body close dont say a word, Let the hands do the talking.
    From head to toe like a blind man would do.
    Pay attention to every elegant curve, senct of perfume, every scar that makes you who are like no other man would

    Flawless, amazing, and beautiful
    2 heartbeat meoldies snyc like itunes
    theres no telling the crazy things we would do
    candle light, roses, bite marks from fighting back, scratches up and down the back, wild hair, clothes every where.
    Get close and personal do it slow ,do it fast, lose all control




    Submitted on 2012-02-20 13:11:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Love it. Gives me tingles. Eeep! Want to get home to my man ;)
    | Posted on 2012-02-29 00:00:00 | by Joybell | [ Reply to This ]


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