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    dots Submission Name: Provocative is Progressdots
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    Author: Anneboleyn707
    ASL Info:    18/Female/Pennsylvania
    Elite Ratio:    3.96 - 44/84/67
    Words: 227
    Class/Type: Poetry/Society
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    dotsProvocative is Progressdots
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    By: Jamie Redlawsk


    Valiant gentlemen,

    Why such weary sentiment?

    The ardor burning on your brow

    Has triumphed little now,

    Has come to such contoured defeat--

    A host for migrant women's feet.

    The curvature that pleases eyes,

    Is little flesh and mostly lies.



    In tune such lovely sirens sing,

    Such pleasantries to suit a king!

    Set stark in virile mass exchange,

    Modern piety warrants new range:

    In body go forth, in form express

    Provocative is progress!

    Yet likely a subverted goal,

    To camouflage the lesser role,



    Or flaunt what ought a girl befit,

    Or discredit boys partake in it,

    Where effigies of poise were burned,

    The gendered binary fast returned.

    A cognitive wash of one color per sex;

    Scorn under breath one who rejects

    Some logic, though I can't say what,

    That deems a hero's inverse “slut”



    Valiant, stagnant gentlemen,

    Pure rationale time and again!

    Ten-chilliad's debauchery

    Is praised readily by HISstory.

    She not he, and his not hers

    The meaningless cause of ambiguous words

    For which your robust daughters;

    The delicate charm of your sons will lose

    The courage, words, and will to choose.




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    ||| Comments |||
      Very classy. To which we recall and reply:

    http://www.luminarium.org/sevenlit/marvell/coy.htm

    | Posted on 2012-02-20 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      Lecherous libido liaison debauchery you lothario louts. Your all a bunch of decadently arrogant perverted deviants on the demonic denizen. You miss the true beauty of mystic symbiosis's fecundity with your wanton revelry. The wayward virility's of your wanderlust are but chauvinistic banality and misogynous megalomania .

    rant...rant...rant

    Bruce

    PS: With the amount of porn there is out there on the web soon enough bobsy twins will be having incestuous relations in the womb. JK! but I guess your correct we're all a bunch of heinously horrendous infidels , while I put a little bit of pandemic phatic on that exserted protuberance for you. JK again!

    PSS: In other words here here!
    | Posted on 2012-02-20 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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