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    dots Submission Name: Brokendots
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    Author: intodesi
    ASL Info:    28/m/On The Road
    Elite Ratio:    4.25 - 16/23/28
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Story/Angst
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    Description:
       Being Broken


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    dotsBrokendots
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    I figured it out, just a step away, one page at a time, simpler yet was the fact it was always there, just right there, no where far, here near close within my reach, but just beyond my sight. I laughed when found it, it was the funniest thing the tune it played as i felt it, I squeezed it tight, my fist closed around it. That poor bird, damn me if that lil' fella's soul didn't just squish out. I cried then as I watched it all just bleed away, the guts and feces all over my hand, its poor eyes just hanging from its broken scalp, but then it just let out this little squeak, and laughed at me. Then It rose from my hand, up in the sky. I found it once, it was always there, but then I picked it up and it broke.




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      i see this as metaphorically crushing the bird...and yes, sometimes when we try to fix those who are broken...we crush them...or we fix them, make them feel better about themselves and then they fly off and never look back.

    intense write...lots of levels that don't meet the eye immediately.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-02-26 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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