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    dots Submission Name: SHASTAS SONG dots
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    Author: DUSTYTU
    Elite Ratio:    5.06 - 246/95/55
    Words: 182
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Written for those special friend that share our lives ffor a while. SHASTAS SONG

    They are loaned to us, for just a while;
    these bright spots in our life.

    A dog, a cat , a fish or bird;
    wordlessly share our strife.

    They bring on smiles, in moments of gloom;
    bring tears of shame at times.

    But through it all they bring us love,
    lest we ever tend to whine.

    Let Shastas memory, brighten your day,
    when next you feel unwound,

    stop and think of all her love,
    she gave to you unbound.




    Submitted on 2012-02-24 18:14:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was a soulful memorial, well penned Rusty. May Shasta rest in peace, comforted by cherished memories.
    | Posted on 2012-02-26 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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