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Submission Name: Silent Auction dots

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Author:	krs3332003
Elite Ratio:	6.49 - 145/114/65
Words:	36

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	1655
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	343

Description:
Sometimes, we need to read between the lines to understand life. If things appear confusing, as they should be, try reversing them. But as it is often said, "Things aren't always black & white." Only a few can really see...

Silent Auction dots

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Softly
come to me
Silently
we drift away
Anonymously
it all begins
Naturally
i wonder why
Atonement
for our sins
Significant
for our flight
Insanely
tempted by fate
Blissfully
ignorant of guilt
Doubtfully
you will understand

Submitted on 2012-02-25 15:37:49 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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i agree with lloyd...smooth piece and the end leaves open to interpretation...either you will understand or you won't ....could go either way---

doubtless it will...

"it all begins naturally"

but will it end the same way?

as long as there is understanding..it will be okay.

jacob
| Posted on 2012-02-27 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
I like the structure and key words projected in this. It moves although seems a little open ended which could benefit the reader to go where he/she wishes with it. Thoughtful.

| Posted on 2012-02-25 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.