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    dots Submission Name: Springdots
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    Author: Toadslayer
    ASL Info:    35/Female/Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.08 - 32/38/15
    Words: 12
    Class/Type: Haiku/Misc
    Total Views: 435
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       Spring


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    dotsSpringdots
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    Lightly snow covered,
    A hint of green peeking out,
    Promises of warmth.




    Submitted on 2012-02-26 17:18:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i really like this.

    green is a promise of warmth, of things to come.

    i think spring is one of my most favorite of the seasons (though i like them all).

    i am ready for sure. (smile).


    nice piece.
    | Posted on 2012-02-28 00:00:00 | by isabella | [ Reply to This ]


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