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    dots Submission Name: Said Hello CMP 1/22/12dots

    Author: Soniathedrummer
    ASL Info:    17 Female, MI
    Elite Ratio:    1.98 - 0/2/32
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsSaid Hello CMP 1/22/12dots

    I've said hello,
    As well as goodbye,
    Cried my sorrows to the empty void,
    Everyone has become annoyed,
    Feeling like a broken toy,
    Never is it enough,
    Don't care how tough life is,
    Tell me your sorrows,
    Explain to me your pain,
    Unlike most I am not vain,
    Drive me insane,
    Make me hope for the bullet,
    Haunting my dreams,
    Never will the misery leave me,
    Happiness is hard to obtain,
    But my spirit still remains,
    Through high water and all,
    Watch me as I fall,
    Regretting nothing,
    Knowing either way it was pointless,
    "Hello" I say in a dull tone,
    "Darkness will you ever leave me?"
    But I know this to be impossible,
    For the hole inside my heart.

    Submitted on 2012-02-26 22:24:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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