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    dots Submission Name: I Wrote A Bookdots
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    Author: heartbrokenpoet
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    Words: 220
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    Description:
       A poem I was considering entering into a poetry contest, I was hoping to get feedback and some thoughts on how to maybe better this..


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    dotsI Wrote A Bookdots
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    I wrote a book today, spilling the seconds of our life

    sharing the very moment, you asked me to be your wife

    I wrote a book today, I filled it with my pride

    this journey I would only take, if I was to be your bride




    I wrote a book today, detailing our demise

    sitting alone on this bed, wallowing in your lies

    I wrote a book today, its words sheer poetry

    about the day you took that bus, forever leaving me




    I wrote a book today, of a part of me you never knew

    Emoting for lost love in my life, created solely by you

    I wrote a book today, pure helter skelter penned within

    Shadows linger over happiness, and what once could have been




    I mailed that book today, for your eyes to tear apart

    the only words contained within, is that you still have my heart

    I mailed that book today, now these words you know to be true

    Read in these pages words of woe, my cure now lies within you








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