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    dots Submission Name: So Rundots
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    Author: austin
    ASL Info:    22/ Male/ Odessa, Texas
    Elite Ratio:    4.41 - 376/396/84
    Words: 156
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Trapped
    Total Views: 468
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1034



    Description:
       Latest song ive written, I dont believe that I will use all the lyrics, im still struggling with the bridge, but I hope you enjoy


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    dotsSo Rundots
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    TIme, has been passing you by,
    as if to steal
    the blue from the sky
    While I, beg for the right
    to convince myself
    that I can make it alright

    ohh...it comes around

    So run, run while you can
    the skies seem so fair
    but you wouldn't dare to leave
    leave all this nothing
    you were the one thing
    you were the one thing wrong

    Real, as it appears in dreams
    forever feels
    like the fraying in seams
    and freedom, a basic need
    like an internal flame
    that struggles to breathe

    Ohh...it comes around

    I never dreamed
    through all of my years
    my clarity would be
    so increasingly smeared
    I can't be
    solemnly
    what you need

    I run, run while I can
    The skies are so fair
    I finally dare to leave
    leave all this nothing
    for you were the one thing
    you were the one thing wrong




    Submitted on 2012-02-27 23:38:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      For me, this is a song about getting what's coming to you. In this case, the person who hurt you had better run while they can, because eventually, what goes around, comes around.

    I think you're suggesting this (what goes aroud, comes around) by saying "ohhh...it comes around". But I'm probably wrong.

    I really like at the end how you switch to saying "I run, run while I can"...as if you realize (finally) that all of this is no good.

    It even appears to me that this whole song could be about you...and how you perceived yourself as being no good for someone (or maybe, not good enough). I guess it's all in the interpretation...

    In any case, nice work!

    K
    | Posted on 2012-03-03 00:00:00 | by krs3332003 | [ Reply to This ]


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