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    dots Submission Name: Donít Want to Be Part Of IT?dots
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    Author: YoungKaizen
    ASL Info:    25/M/Brooklyn,NYC
    Elite Ratio:    1.26 - 4/6/19
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Venting
    Total Views: 706
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    Bytes: 492



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       Crying Out For the Lord


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    dotsDonít Want to Be Part Of IT?dots
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    Lord I have made a lot of mistakes in my life

    Iím a grown man acting like a kid causing my mother pain

    I have thought out loud for so long that my words seem useless now

    Fighting with myself everyday to figure out my way

    Feeling pain every day because I cannot find a stable mind

    And I cannot blame anyone for this but myself

    This unchristian Life Lord, I donít want to be part of it





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