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Close your eyes...


Author: krs3332003
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Class/Type: Poetry /Nature
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It's amazing what a little R&R can do...need I say anymore?


Close your eyes...


Drifting melodically
So seamlessly
The corridors of contemplation

Waves that pass
So momentary
A canopy of perfection

Senses rain
Perception's muse
Such is this reality

Ripples of fate
Countless possibilities
Choices that are made

Gentle winds
Watchful eyes
Set the course true

Crystal clear blue
Sail away
The Sea of Life




Submitted on 2012-03-01 18:28:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Thanks. I needed to escape into something peaceful today, if only for a moment. Great Imagery, I could see myself there.

Love and Peace,
Christie
| Posted on 2012-03-02 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]


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