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    Author: krs3332003
    Elite Ratio:    6.49 - 145/114/65
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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       It's amazing what a little R&R can do...need I say anymore?


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    dotsClose your eyes...dots
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    Drifting melodically
    So seamlessly
    The corridors of contemplation

    Waves that pass
    So momentary
    A canopy of perfection

    Senses rain
    Perception's muse
    Such is this reality

    Ripples of fate
    Countless possibilities
    Choices that are made

    Gentle winds
    Watchful eyes
    Set the course true

    Crystal clear blue
    Sail away
    The Sea of Life




    Submitted on 2012-03-01 18:28:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Thanks. I needed to escape into something peaceful today, if only for a moment. Great Imagery, I could see myself there.

    Love and Peace,
    Christie
    | Posted on 2012-03-02 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]


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