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    dots Submission Name: frienddots
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    Author: scardnscared
    ASL Info:    25/ DFW
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 585/498/311
    Words: 193
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsfrienddots
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    in all my dreams
    i never thought
    that years would pass
    and we would grow
    apart.

    oh how the pain never seems to stray
    and my world will never be the same
    we promised oh so many things
    but we cannot go back it seems.

    sometimes i pray
    that your face will someday fade away
    and they wont ask me what your doing today.

    we used to think
    that we had the answers to everything
    so sure that we were going to end up
    together at the finish line.

    when i went left
    you went right
    and our lines never thought to cross
    and now were so many miles apart.

    how was i to know
    that this was going to happen
    in our dreams we were always together.

    well i guess the dreams of little girls
    they dont always come true
    we used to wear our friendship with pride
    and now we both need to hide it.

    we swore we would be bestfriends till the end
    well i guess this is the end
    because time cannot turn back
    no matter how hard we try..





    Submitted on 2012-03-01 22:57:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Poem reflects a deep and cherished frienship. The anguish of losing the best friend is immanent in this ditty.
    | Posted on 2012-03-05 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]


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