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    dots Submission Name: What is on the female mind? dots
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    Author: KeeperOfLight
    ASL Info:    23, Vancouver BC
    Elite Ratio:    2.55 - 41/64/76
    Words: 143
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Comedy
    Total Views: 446
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    Bytes: 815



    Description:
       exercise of my thoughts
    with a comic i made... lol
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    dotsWhat is on the female mind? dots
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    Many men walk through the world, wondering what is on the female mind. Pretty things like golden rings, or puppies and cute kittens? Those are fine things to think about, however, unfortunately for this wenches mind, it is elsewhere. Elsewhere is the gutter - the gutter, which is the black hole of all women, where thoughts enter the vortex and receive a totally different, warped signal, then what is supposedly anticipated on the other side. This wench is always thinking of such black hole things. Yes, the wench is referring to the part where children supposedly come out after 9 months of a seed being planted – but we aren’t talking about the glorification of new life arising into the world, but the hotter, more seducing part of it. The messy, the wet and the fishy!

    Slurp, slurp!




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