Her kisses

Author: Rainwater Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 7 /29 /19 Words: 13

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Her kisses

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Sometimes her lips taste like smoke I don't like it But I do

Submitted on 2012-03-05 02:44:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Very thoughtful. A strange mixture of sensations, one not so good, one addictive nevertheless.

| Posted on 2012-03-05 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

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