Her kisses by Rainwater

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Submission Name: Her kisses dots

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Author:	Rainwater
Elite Ratio:	2.25 - 7/29/19
Words:	13

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
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Her kisses dots

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Sometimes her lips taste like smoke
I don't like it
But I do

Submitted on 2012-03-05 02:44:57 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Very thoughtful. A strange mixture of sensations, one not so good, one addictive nevertheless.
| Posted on 2012-03-05 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.