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Her kisses


Author: Rainwater
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Words: 13
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Her kisses



Sometimes her lips taste like smoke
I don't like it
But I do




Submitted on 2012-03-05 02:44:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Very thoughtful. A strange mixture of sensations, one not so good, one addictive nevertheless.
| Posted on 2012-03-05 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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