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Sometimes her lips taste like smoke
I don't like it
But I do
Submitted on 2012-03-05 02:44:57
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2: I dunno...
4: Pretty cool
Very thoughtful. A strange mixture of sensations, one not so good, one addictive nevertheless.
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