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Author:	isabella
Elite Ratio:	5.71 - 748/809/442
Words:	17

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psalm #908 dots

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God touched me.
and my spine
rippled into being.

Submitted on 2012-03-05 08:26:45 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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1: >_<
2: I dunno...
3: meh!
4: Pretty cool
5: Wow!

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  this was amazing. I definately felt the ripple into being and how proufound a line. Thanks for sharing this.

| Posted on 2012-08-03 00:00:00 | by BevRead | [ Reply to This ]
  I have a certain love for compact, yet meaningful poems. I believe the less words you use to convey your message, the more powerful those words have to be. Like cutting off the excess.

At any rate, I absolutely love each and every word in this and the image they conjure.
| Posted on 2012-03-07 00:00:00 | by Rainwater | [ Reply to This ]
  Stunning, G.
| Posted on 2012-03-06 00:00:00 | by trinityfinger | [ Reply to This ]
  such a compact little charmer this poem is.
| Posted on 2012-03-05 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
  I like where this goes. The spine thing. Sometimes if you haven't faith you haven't spine either. I wonder if that's what happened to Christopher Columbus? It took a lot of nerve/spine to sail off towards the edge of the world.
| Posted on 2012-03-05 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.