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    dots Submission Name: psalm #908dots

    Author: isabella
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    dotspsalm #908dots

    God touched me.
    and my spine
    rippled into being.

    Submitted on 2012-03-05 08:26:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this was amazing. I definately felt the ripple into being and how proufound a line. Thanks for sharing this.

    | Posted on 2012-08-03 00:00:00 | by BevRead | [ Reply to This ]
      I have a certain love for compact, yet meaningful poems. I believe the less words you use to convey your message, the more powerful those words have to be. Like cutting off the excess.

    At any rate, I absolutely love each and every word in this and the image they conjure.
    | Posted on 2012-03-07 00:00:00 | by Rainwater | [ Reply to This ]
      Stunning, G.
    | Posted on 2012-03-06 00:00:00 | by trinityfinger | [ Reply to This ]
      such a compact little charmer this poem is.
    | Posted on 2012-03-05 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      I like where this goes. The spine thing. Sometimes if you haven't faith you haven't spine either. I wonder if that's what happened to Christopher Columbus? It took a lot of nerve/spine to sail off towards the edge of the world.
    | Posted on 2012-03-05 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

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