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    dots Submission Name: Truth Is..dots
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    Author: DearlyDeparted
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    dotsTruth Is..dots
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    Truth is the most undefinable word.
    Truth is a fish that flies like a bird.
    Truth is a master who's secretly jealous.
    And thinks the apprentice is too overzealous.
    Truth is a country that faded away
    Because the people kept fighting over who should pay.
    Truth is a woman who can't feed her kids.
    But can get on eBay to check on her bids.
    Truth is the government rigs the election.
    Truth is the pope gets a morning erection.
    In a court of law the truth is comprised by "who's the best actor? Who tells the best lies?"
    Truth is a weatherman can't predict weather
    But a cow can sense storms and it's killed for its leather.
    Truth is we kick warriors out of the service.
    Cuz same sex couples make some people nervous.
    Truth is a man who's mugged for his cash.
    And nobody helps cuz they love a train crash.
    Truth is when people make money, but complain about losing free time, but people with cancer will die because they can't make a dime.
    Truth is, when most people hate their time being spent, others lay crying wondering where their time went.
    Thinking about truth can mess with your head. But you won't understand it till you're on your death bed.




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      Truth is easy for the wicked to describe
    it's an efficacious and liberating diatribe
    Truth is an essence that don't yet exsit
    a spontaneous conclave liaison list
    Truth is an explicating eventuation
    awaiting unanimous confirmation


    Gee girl this was inspirational but I don't intend to wait till I die to relate!

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2012-03-07 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      Absolutely brutally honest. The idea is unique and touches home extremely well. The flow of the piece only adds to tone that it carries. Wonderful :)
    | Posted on 2012-03-06 00:00:00 | by Indaleco | [ Reply to This ]


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