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    dots Submission Name: Girl on Firedots
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    Author: Realitywarp87
    ASL Info:    25/M/FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 27/53/63
    Words: 334
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 807
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2003



    Description:
       Inspired by 'The Hunger Games' series through the eyes of Katniss Everdeen.


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    dotsGirl on Firedots
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    From the moment her name was read aloud my life has become a war
    This world is my arena, but it wasnít so before
    The meadow was my only escape, through the woods Iíd hunt and play
    Taking in the air of the forest and the songs of mockingjays

    Now, as I walk along the rubble of a place I once called home
    An overwhelming sense of emptiness makes me feel, suddenly, alone
    With no one to confide in, Iím torn between two loves I have
    Both equal parts to my tormented heart. My soul, with each, does split in half

    Iíve seen the face of Death, wreaking havoc in the land
    Reaping children from their parents as they die by their own hand
    The faces of enemies and allies flash before me with confused stares
    Begging to save and spare them, as their screams haunt my nightmares

    With a country in upheaval, itís districts in revolt
    A Capitol against a revolution; No ceasefire to call a halt
    I, through a simple pin, have become the face of freedom
    Through irrational means of survival and uncountable forms of reason

    This face, that holds many scars, does take the role to heart
    Hoping for change, a brighter future where children, in warfare, shall play no part
    This face, which burns with fury, shall destroy corruptive souls
    Bringing unity throughout the nation, planting seeds of primrose in place of woe

    This face, that holds many identities, shall only know the one
    Who cares, unselfishly, for others since the day her life has begun
    This face, whose refusal to be a pawn, led to a democratic reign
    Unflinching in a fight, for this youth knows no pain

    A volunteer to a crisis; A tribute to a game
    A victor to a district; A symbol brought by fame
    A promise to her loved ones, who safe and sound remain
    A phoenix reborn from ashes, as the girl consumed by flames




    Submitted on 2012-03-05 16:05:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I'm in the middle of the first book...I like this. That's all I've got say so far. Let me add this to my favs, finish the book, and the I'll come back and comment. Yep, I like this.
    | Posted on 2012-03-14 00:00:00 | by SincerWritinAsh | [ Reply to This ]


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