Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Something has changeddots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Rainin_Raspbery
    ASL Info:    22/F/Edmonton/AB/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.45 - 145/140/109
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
    Total Views: 1041
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 743



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsSomething has changeddots
    -------------------------------------------


    As usual
    I stand alone
    Feel everything
    Guts and glory
    Something has changed

    Its more intense
    These days
    The overwhelming sadness
    I simply cannot explain
    I guess I'm sick of denying
    No longer playing any more mind games
    To relieve my pain
    Lodged inside my heart and brain
    Something has changed

    Almost like
    Iím forcing myself
    To take it all in
    It something I cannot explain

    Is this good or
    Is it bad
    I havenít the slightest idea
    But itís different
    Maybe something is coming
    Finally waving a white flag
    My way
    Something has changed




    Submitted on 2012-03-07 14:54:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    194526

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry