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    Author: kenzieboo2
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    Words: 184
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    I have little to no self respect for my own self or self worth. Im DROWNING. again... I know how to save myself, I just dont care enough to do it. the feeling of love and happiness are temporary only in comparison to the lasting void of losing someone you truly care for. Why do i push myself, why cant i stop, help, help me please. Strength is only a front it spoils the weakness and scares those who know no better then to be weak. I am afraid but not trembling.I am angry but i show no demand, i am cold and alone but surround myself with friend be nots........ I trust no one but disclose enough. I hate my existence the life i live. the people who help build this vision, the vision of strength. I survive by him, Im alive by him, help me. im still drowning. a CHALK BOARD WITH INVISIBLE SCRIPTS SCREAMING TO AN AUDIENCE. DEAF ARE THE EARS THAT HEAR HER TRUTHS EVEN FAINTER IS THE VOICE THAT CHANTS THEM. a mindless existence inhabits crazed flesh...




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