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    dots Submission Name: Who I Amdots
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    Author: Rainwater
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 7/29/19
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       Just wondering what the contents of our pockets and purses say about who we are as people. This is who I am. Who are you?

    Interested in what images these items produce for you. I wonder what these items say about who I am. Also interested to hear what items you have with you at all times.


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    dotsWho I Amdots
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    I am

    A few crumpled dollar bills
    Cheap sunglasses with one temple akimbo
    A theater ticket stub from The Lion King dated 10:10pm Fri 9/16/2011
    A paperback copy of The Princess Bride - the Good Parts version

    Just in case
    For lovely days
    To remind of lovely days passed
    To fill the lulls in life with something loved




    Submitted on 2012-03-07 20:01:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Good memories of things enjoyed. Cool.

    For the creature of habit:
    Wallet kept thin and comfortable in right rear along with a comb if I haven't dropped it yet, small Buck lock blade pocket knife in right front, 2 gig memory stick in left front, wedding ring on finger, watch optional and oh yes, the Dead On skull and cross bones clip-on pouch for the Nokia cell phone. That is pretty much me.

    Thanks for the intro and introspection.

    Lloyd
    | Posted on 2012-03-15 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow! I realize that isn't much of a critique, but you said in a very few words a lot about who you are as an individual.

    The images that came to me were that of a student of the arts...possibly a college student. Someone who isn't too worried about money...someone who is practical.

    Oddly enough, I just watched the "Princes Birde" the other night (with my girlfriend and her daughter). Anybody want a peanut? :)

    For me, I always carry a pocket knife. You just never know. I usually have a few dollars in my pocket...neatly folded (lower bills on top). Depending on the season, I'll have a leather bomber jacket...which becomes an extension of my pants pockets. I'll carry all sorts of things in that beast...small flashlight, lighter, pen, small notebook, hand sanitizer, leather gloves, mint gum...etc, etc. I wonder what that says about me as a person?

    Thanks for posting...and moreover, thank you for asking the reader to become involved in your work. It was a nice change of pace...

    K
    | Posted on 2012-03-08 00:00:00 | by krs3332003 | [ Reply to This ]


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