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ive cleary lost my mind..


Author: scardnscared
ASL Info:    25/ DFW
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ive cleary lost my mind..



have you ever seen the sun shine
or heard a new born baby cry?
have you ever lost your breath
or never watch your next step?

cause i have
and everytime i see you cry
its like the first time.

and how could i forget
the smell of your skin
or the taste of your breath.

you were the center to my universe
and you would never let me forget
cause you shined so bright
that you burned the blue out of my irises.

we would walk
hand in hand
down in the sand
and we would smile
show our teeth
and bite our lips.

were has the time gone?
and where are you again?
i can't forget that first look
or the last for that matter...

you jumble up my brain sometimes
i can't tell whats wrong or right
and i wish i could go back in time
but whats the use of things?

ive gone crazy as you can see
im wearing my heart out on my sleeve
screaming up at the sky
wishing i could be set free.

watch me as i succumb
to the fear
to the pain
to the thought of never being sane

think of me and please just smile
don't be scared because im not there
just live your life and ill live mine
and remember

i was your first and you promised me
i would be your last.

but we both know you lied.




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