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    Author: EEKS
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    I donít trust things anymore. I donít trust pictures of pretty girls and I donít trust the songs people write. I donít trust that people are friendly and I donít trust that anyone has good intentions. I donít trust forgiveness or old friends anymore either. Iím getting away as soon as I can if I donít disappear first. You never think about it but people can just slip away and at first you donít hear from them and then theyíre just gone. And you canít find them. And you don't get to worry about me now, I'm better tonight than when I was lost, driving my way home on shrooms and that was because of you too, because you'd tried them and I hadn't. You left me out then and I wanted to pull you in now and it broke me. And everything was dark and now its all gone and I want to be gone too.




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      The title of poem should be LOST TRUST. The poem narrates very bad experiences which you have encountered. It's all almighty's grace if you meet good people and have good experiences and wonderful life.
    | Posted on 2012-03-12 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]


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