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    dots Submission Name: Age of the Martyrdots
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    Author: Darkest Flaw
    ASL Info:    20/M/WA
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 193/265/89
    Words: 178
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Depressed
    Total Views: 308
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       this is a song I wrote about the way the mind changes over time. and life seems like it's turning into a dream, and dreams start to seem real.


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    dotsAge of the Martyrdots
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    Dreaming is the real life,
    and living seems the dream,
    Heaven awaits, as aftermath,
    for the days lost,
    at every rising sun...


    and Every night,
    the stars shine,
    but no one seems to care,
    at every rising moon,
    a soul is lost,
    because no one's ever there...


    A lonely ear, to listen,
    an empty heart, to feel,
    a shoulder for a head to rest,
    when nothing feels so real,
    now memories seem grafittied,
    upon the crumbling walls,
    the ruins left, just rotting,
    and there is where you'll fall...


    so look to the skies,
    for anwsers to your pain,
    every empty light,
    an ever watching eye,
    and when the sun sleeps,
    you'll never be the same...


    and Every night,
    the stars shine,
    but no one seems to care,
    at every rising moon,
    a soul is lost,
    because no one's ever there...




    Submitted on 2004-08-01 20:34:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey..this was a good write..i like the 2nd stanza and its first two lines...i really don't understand why other people don't appreciate the beauty of the stars or anything from the nature...and i salute u for sharing that idea here in this poem..nothing more to say...good job!
    meh,
    jen
    | Posted on 2004-08-01 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey this was pretty good. I can difinately relate to this especially if you read some of my poems you'll see why. But it truly sounds like you've been through some of the same stuff I've been through.
    | Posted on 2004-08-01 00:00:00 | by musclebound350 | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow. I really enjoyed this piece. These past few days have been bad for me and this poem/song really tells it like it is. I especially loved the part where it started, A lonely ear, to listen,... that was my favorite part. It was very well written and I enjoyed this a lot. Great work!
    | Posted on 2004-08-01 00:00:00 | by abby2391 | [ Reply to This ]



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