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    dots Submission Name: Anger Issuesdots
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    Author: monad
    ASL Info:    64/M/California
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1083/406/116
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    Obtusely overt and contusionally obscene,
    boy I feel like being mean
    Rip its face off, shove it up its nose,
    be a raven in a flock of crows
    Be a bad ass savage brutal,
    why I'll even throw in the kit and caboodle
    Feral phrenic frenzied slut,
    with immaculate mule kit blues aimed butt
    One for all and all for one,
    we're all moving to Fullerton
    Where the lecherous lothario lout
    is no longer libido liaison's tout
    Fecund cogent liberating exigence,
    do you get it or are you dense
    Pique puissant piquant quintescence,
    have you all learned your lessons







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      I think it's funny.
    Somewhere in there, I'm sure you spit.
    | Posted on 2014-02-04 00:00:00 | by KimmyMim | [ Reply to This ]
      I understand none of this. I'm wondering if I'm ignorant, or actually as stupid as I feel...
    | Posted on 2013-12-17 00:00:00 | by TeslaKoyal | [ Reply to This ]
      I like angry alliteration station.
    | Posted on 2013-04-13 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      I was feeling this way a few days ago, but I thought to myself why should I be feeling this way, there is too many people out there who is full of anger and do crazy things because of it. Sometimes I do feel crazy but then again we all have some kind insanity inside us right? Well nicely written and I just "HAD" to comment one last time before I leave here, I'm going to miss reading your unique threaded words, that is so carefully written oh and the big strange inspiring words I absolutely adore. Anyways this another favorite of yours :)

    Aljx~ <3
    | Posted on 2012-12-01 00:00:00 | by TangledInDreams | [ Reply to This ]
      Google "fullerton beating"
    become a cop? I think not.
    I could not be a cop
    for I would surely pop
    But bless the patient ones
    who become not patients
    our boys in blue
    who know what to do
    and what not to
    to me and you


    | Posted on 2012-03-15 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      "Obtusely overt and contusionally obscene"

    I've never thought of obscenity as having the ability to bruise. Makes sense, though...
    also, a pretty brilliant turn of phrase

    "boy I feel like being mean
    Rip its face off, shove it up its nose,
    be a raven in a flock of crows
    Be a bad ass savage brutal,
    why I'll even throw in the kit and caboodle
    Feral phrenic frenzied slut,
    with immaculate mule kit blues aimed butt"

    No clue there...other than you must be describing one helluvanass.

    "One for all and all for one,
    we're all moving to Fullerton"

    California?

    "Where the lecherous lothario lout
    is no longer libido liaison's tout
    Fecund cogent liberating exigence,
    do you get it or are you dense
    Pique puissant piquant quintescence,
    have you all learned your lessons"

    I like the way you alternated the heavy verbosity with some more simplistic stuff.
    Kinda makes a person think they can follow along.

    "do you get it or are you dense"

    For me, it's a 50/50 chance either way, really.

    "have you all learned your lessons"

    Time will tell.
    | Posted on 2012-03-14 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]
      I relish these rollicking lines, especially the seventh and fifteenth, which drop into mouth-foaming incoherence and feral hissing and spitting, respectively. They read out like crazy!

    My brother says anger is the only genuine emotion. I could never beat that out of him.
    | Posted on 2012-03-14 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]


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