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    dots Submission Name: Past, Present, and Futuredots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 203
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Longing
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    dotsPast, Present, and Futuredots
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    I wonder where this life is going to lead me
    or the future struggles I will soon encounter
    I can only hope that my past endeavors have ran their course,
    and I can truly move past them - what was, and look forward to - what will be
    I hope to find a man who will love me, hold me, keep me safe, and wipe my tears from my cheeks
    He can accept me and all this baggage I carry with me in this life
    I am only doing the very best I can,
    With what has been handed to me
    I am no longer that tough little girl, who held it all in
    who did not shed a single tear
    My sadness only portrayed threw silent treatments and anger
    So many people told me this was a defensive mechanism...
    So often I have wished to be that girl again
    However, I burned out the fuse for such a reoccurrence some time ago

    Now I am forced to lead, life as the majority of us do...
    Emotional
    Frail
    Vulnerable

    To those who surround me,
    Nothing to protect me any longer not even I can protect myself now...





    Submitted on 2012-03-14 09:21:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      You can't possibly have THAT much baggage at just 22. And this is about the age when you realize, 'Oh crap, I really AM on my own.'

    Sometimes it sucks. But sometimes it's wonderful. And it's always scary. You'll be fine.
    | Posted on 2012-03-18 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet | [ Reply to This ]
      Wonder why is it that when we wish for love, we find it so difficult to get.
    Wonder that's how life is.
    Wonder if there will be love when we wish there to be.
    Wonder if we will have the courage to walk alone till then.

    Absolutelylost
    | Posted on 2012-03-14 00:00:00 | by AbsolutelyLost | [ Reply to This ]


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