Little Whirlwinds

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Little Whirlwinds

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I remember when It was dark and I was cold But at least we were dark and we were cold Together Even insanity is sometimes Better Than Sadness

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or sanity is a way to cope!

| Posted on 2012-03-16 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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