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Little Whirlwinds


Author: Rainwater
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Mourning love lost, trust broken, and lurking sadness. Aren't I just the most poetic soul?


Little Whirlwinds



I remember when
It was dark and I was cold
But at least we were dark and we were cold
Together

Even insanity is sometimes
Better
Than
Sadness




Submitted on 2012-03-15 04:31:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  or sanity is a way to cope!
| Posted on 2012-03-16 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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